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Honest criticism of the poem?
Glow in words vividly reported. The future of poetry in an unknown determined. Will the flow continue when the great ones are gone? has the eloquence perished, or bright light dark past? If it continues, so Will these beautiful words go? But these thoughts walking. The brightness continues at this place, a capsule picturesque, untouched by time. So the writers are still using pen and paper, and click the soft-Clacks keyboard, our thoughts, dreams, theories and develop. And together, he is still alive. Please help! Opinions? Sorry, check own work! It must be, will be the beautiful words disappear. No extra "will"!
It's very nice and certainly a wonderful start. It has a very strong, I like how it doesn't go on many directions. The only thing I want is critical in the flow. Add some words to shorter lines, taking a few lines long, a little of both. Also I think the line "vividly disclosed" should be changed. as you put it in context, and meaning of words, but not the actual words. I think it is a large flow-blocker. Change vividly, dissemination, or simply make a new sentence, without any of the words. I hope I helped you! http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt = ApJO0m.ETnebh.5yGAoo89Hsy6IX; _ylv = 3? qid = 20080920140529AAqhg5U please try to help me too:)
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